-he liked her, but could not be with her.

-he said he would rather die than to lose her.

-they thought his insanity was just a joke.

-they thought he will let go as soon as the matter goes.

-so they ignored him, thinking that a joker like him should not be bothered.

-their isolation did not bother him

-for her attention is all he wants.

-but her not caring hurts him so much he took a risk.

-he asked her out.

-she was so scared that she asked her boyfriend to follow her.

-throughout the journey, her emotions were tensed.

-she felt that something was going to happen
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-sometimes, a girl’s intuition is very accurate.
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-they reached and they saw him.

-he looks sad and pathetic, so she straight away runs to his side without much thought.

-for a moment, she forgot that tense feeling during the journey.
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-but beautiful moments never last long.
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-without much word, he reached for his pocket knife.

-he stared and said ‘how could you ignore me like the others? How could you?’

-he was very worked up.

-his emotions were running out of control.

-then, he placed the knife at her neck, as a threat to make her stay.

-that’s all he wants, her accompany.

-but he knows she is not going to stay, when he saw her eyes.

-her eyes were filled with determination to leave him.

-of course, her boyfriend did not know what was going on.

-in his eyes, the only important thing now is the safety of his girl.

-he started to struggle with him to take away that knife that has hurt her neck.

-it was a long struggle and both of them were forceful against each other.

-and then, he accidentally stabbed him.
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-accidents always happen during the critical moments.
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-she screamed.
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-moments later, the ambulance came. The sirens frightened her and the flipping of the door each time a nurse rushed in or out of the surgery room freaked her out.

-everything was too scary she almost breaks down.

-and the culprit now is nowhere to be found.
***********
-minutes went pass slowly.

-finally, the surgeon came out of the room.

-she prayed for good news, but

-‘sorry, we did our best. Please inform his parents about this.’
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-it was just a moment of relief, followed by another moment of fear.

-she called his parents and then rushed in to see him.
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-he was smiling, wiping the tears off that little girl’s face, who is now kneeling beside him.

-she was the girl he used his life to protect.

-still smiling, he said: ‘when I die, I’ll be that butterfly that stays by your side forever. So, don’t cry. I’m not leaving.’

-word by word, he said it with much difficulty, trying to hide the pain caused by his injury.

-he then sit up a little and place the butterfly necklace around her neck

-his last gift to her.

-she cried again.

-then his parents rushed in.

-they were all about him, and she wanted to leave for she felt so left out.

-but he pulled her hands.

-she looked back and saw him smile gently to her.

-a moment later, he was gone.
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-she was so sad she ran to the rooftop and started yelling non-stop till she was tired.

-with little energy left, she fall back and lie flat on the ground.
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-everything was just too sudden.
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-but hours later, she smiled weakly and get up to leave.

-what were left were a rose and a butterfly resting on it.
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-nobody knew what revive her smiles so fast at a gloomy moment like this except for the sun and the clouds, for they witnessed him keeping his promise.
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~when I die, I’ll be that butterfly that stays by your side forever. ~


(tell me if its nice, for i am starting to hate this story as soon as i post it up)

Categories: a story i wrote [t]

aw cute.. but im confused. was the guy who died a stalker
» changbang on 2007-03-10 02:33:20

to changbang
erm....what is a stalker??

anyway,the guy who died was that girl's boyfriend.
» c-s-y on 2007-03-10 02:15:41

eh
it reminds me of a myspace bullitin...I'm not sure that's what you want to hear
» middaymoon on 2007-03-11 04:06:14

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